fix some mistakes in research paper

The professer give me some comments, you have a good start here, but what you REALLY have to add citations and you also need to add some more of your own thoughts. It’s a great draft, though, and I look forward to discussing this with you in person.


The due is jun 10/2016 4:00


I want fix some mistake


and it will be final draft 






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